Frayed/Lovestruck: Pg 2

Prologue: [link]
Page 1: [link]
Page 2: In which some bad memories are brought back
Page 3: [link]
Extra 1: [link]

*flops over* Anyone want to know why this took so long to finish? Victor. Victor Frankenstein, it's all your fault your lineart was so difficult to finish!! You only appeared in a grand total of 6 panels, yet you had the most extensive lineart! Not even Edgar was as hard to draw as you were!
That, and baseball. Why are baseball poses so hard?! That being said, please excuse Toshi's pitching pose. I used this reference for him: [link]
I hope I didn't go too far off-base from what wrote (found here: [link]). I'm really liking how some of the things turned out, especially Toshi's angry face and Victor's black-and-white shot, which I have affectionately named "The Horrific Flashback Scene". I'm serious, I winced every time I looked at Victor about to cry. And I had drawn that!
(Edits: Colored those pencils in Toshi's pocket black because they're distracting otherwise. Took out the buttons on Victor's shirt because they were also distracting. And I forgot Nassor's hair streaks before, but they're fixed now pleasedon'thurtme!)

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